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A new day dawns.

What can I say Steph
to portray my thoughts upon your return?
There are more questions than answers.
yet joy is there as well.
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I understood why you left-
but there was no real goodbye only possibilities.
then you were gone-a busy life called,
a new love bloomed from an old passion.
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          ~~~
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A mother now, you return once again
with a heart full of memories
and a mind full of moments,
a life full of experience.
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          ~~~
          ~
I receive you with a warm embrace
my poetic yet sometimes troubled child; my friend.
Let your hearts words spill upon the page,
a legacy for your child to better understand you.

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Ogert Baldwin

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  • Delicate Fire Water
    September 25, 2008
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    Thank you for this wonderful entry

    Good luck in my contest

    Stephi-Dawne x