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Questions

Why do I love you?
why do I care?

How can seeing your screen name on my computer send me into such a panic and cause bundles of butterflies to escape and flutter free inside my soul?

What is it about you that makes me so damn insanely sane?
Where do you occupy inside of me that prohibits me from losing touch with this place?

How can a zillion seconds pass by with out you and the only one that counts is the one that has you in it?

Have you any idea? Any idea at all exactly what it is that you do to me?
If you knew would you even care?

How can something that seems ( to outward appearences ) to be so very, very wrong feel so damn right when I find myself in your presence?

If it's not you, the one meant for me, how is it that you are the ONLY ONE to ever stir me to the deepest depths of my soul?

I have no clue! No idea! I can not explain the how's or the why's!

It simply is what it is and nothing feels as right as you!

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This isn't really a poem or even a story....just my thought's and questions!

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  • iloveEdwardCullen17
    September 22, 2008

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    Wow!!!!

    This poem is out standing!!!!! So much passion. I feel the same way about this one guy I dated but we still talk and I still love him. I don't think he realizes that I still have feelings for him.


    • sapphireangelwings
      September 22, 2008
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      It's so hard to love someone when one is so unsure of the other's feelings! I wish you the best in your situation and thanks for stopping by to read and comment. Marie