My heart dropped when I got the word today,
I hope all is well and in a safe place.
We as people are often saved,
while the possessions are lost along the way.
But our most treasured possessions are our loved ones indeed,
And the storm spared them and honey dont you see.
Life so preserved holds the heart true,
and I thank God he within his arms helped your familly I do.
Together we shall see you get back on your feet,
and if I can help please tell me .
For in your teaching we are one heart as a drum beat today,
and we shall stand together and be a part it's our way.
So God Bless you honey and for he so spared your families life,
Through such a storm he gave you light.
Walk with him and he shall show you the way,
to the future and brighter days.
I love you honey and yes our heart beats as one beneath the sun love Patty.
Author notes
Take care and I am so hurt from your loss of your home but possessions can be rebuilt lives lost cant so you were blessed to be here and know amongst all who loves you we are here for you
A contest entry
- SpiritMother's Home Devastated By Hurricane Ike by maa.
999 points, ended September 29, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sister of my heart,
Thank you and all the others that have commented on your poem..Although this has been a trying time, the love has lifted me as it always does when I think of the spirit that abides in us all. Email me at cinnamentte@netzero.net anytime..Love and light always!
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thank you so much for participating in spiritmother's contest with such a heartfelt and sincere write ... may your words of love and friendship lift mother's spirit ...
blessings,
maa
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Very nice and caring poem well written to uplift the spirits of a dear friend that lost thier home and possesions to a storm. A process I am much familuar to.
The rhyme and ryth of this poem are well done and easy to read. The message and the emotion of the poem are also very clear. Its very well written. Good luck in the contest you should do good.
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Wow, so beautiful and heartfelt. I so very enjoyed reading it, you have a big heart dear.
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Wow, so beautiful and heartfelt. I so very enjoyed reading it, you have a big heart dear.
Best of luck in contest.
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AWWW patty this is a beautiful love poem
xxx
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