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in the blank easel –
I saw myself
ready to be painted.

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  • broken-colours
    November 4, 2008

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    This is absolutely amazing. Brevity is the best for you: that way you can say the most and completely blow people away. Just... wow.


  • nancy drew
    November 4, 2008
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    i like this, i'm rather fond of haiku.

    helen~


  • Faded Existence
    October 7, 2008
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    this is beautiful! I love it!

    -Faded


  • sheltered
    October 5, 2008
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    excellent... hadn't noticed you online in a while
    but I see your still slingin' it well


  • Tirrell
    October 1, 2008
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    This explains much of warhol's work, very well done!
    A good take on the quote.


  • Nangaleema
    September 29, 2008

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    yes. full of potential, ripe with possibility. that is what it is to be sixteen! lovely write. - NANGALEEMA


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 24, 2008

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    lol, i like this one, it kind of made me laugh a bit, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.


  • going nowhere
    September 22, 2008
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    excellent!!! love this


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    September 22, 2008

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    Nice

    I find this a very intriguing poem. the poem itsef has alot of hidden value depth and meanings through out it. to me at least you are almost tlaking about how one can not predict their destiny/future but can create their future/destiny and thus once the canvus is completely painted in the way it was meant to be thus the end of life. any ways just my weird little take from it. anyways good work & good luck with the contest Lil Bro

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