[Verse 1]
Oh no
The sky is falling down
And now the world is ending
[Verse 2]
Look fast
It’s all going by
Hold on don’t blink this time
[Chorus]
We’re all falling down in time
Remember everything we used to do
I know… I know
It’s all over soon
The worlds now ending
It’ll never be the same
[Verse 3]
Hold tight
Slipping through your grasp
Say goodbye, as your life is pulled away
[Verse 4]
Don’t cry
Your tears will fade away
Leaving stains on what you cried on
It’s all over say goodbye
[Chorus]
We’re all falling down in time
Remember everything we used to do
I know… I know
It’s all over soon
The worlds now ending
It’ll never be the same
[Bridge]
You are damaged
Slowly breaking
I see you bleeding
I hear you crying
Yea you are damaged
It’s all over soon
It’s time to say goodbye
[Chorus]
We’re all falling down in time
Remember everything we used to do
I know, yes I know
It’s all over soon
The worlds now ending
It’ll never be the same
It’s all over soon
The world’s now ending
It’ll never be the same
It’s time to say good bye
Author notes
and again.. another song attempt. tell me what u think
thoughts...
Comments
-
Very Cool
I liked it. Kind of along the same lines as my Lyric I have posted. I don't think you need to put in all the "Verse1 and Verse2" stuff, really just your own preference though. Chorus and Bridge always help for people to piece it together. I can hear a crunchy guitar with a little high twang on it as I read the words. Sounds like something the band Incubus could put to music very well.
---- Can I make a suggestion for Verse 4 ? Don't cry - your tears will fade away...' leaving stains on all the things you've tried to say.' It's all over so say goodbye.
Keep on writing - I like it. PeAcE Wierd - I gave it 3 applause and they aren't showing. sorry bout that. -
Wow, that's very vivid! Good one!
-
*whistles*
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =P
love ya babez, MUAH ♥
Adding your comment:
