I look to the front
I see the beautiful sunset
I look behind me
I see the magical moonlight
I look to my right
I see the soaring birds
I look to my left
And i see you
My life, my light, my world
I reach for your hand
And pull you towards me
You wrap your arms around
And i know that nothing can harm me
Once i am in your arms
I let out a content sigh
What could be better
Than lying with the one
Who makes me feel wanted
Who makes me feel loved
I'm starting to know
I am loved in this world
By a boy who i can always turn to
Who i can hold on to
He is a part of me
And me, a part of him
A contest entry
- True Love by Samantha Marie.
450 points, ended October 5, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me how much you love... by Nidaeah.
1000 points, ended October 31, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Good write
I like this poem very much. But unfortunatly you missed the first rule. But this is still very good. I'll keep it in for consideration.
Thank you.
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Wow hannah! I never knew you were such a good writer!
i love how you start the poem with what you see on each side of you...and then how the poem flows into the bit about your love...
you should enter some contests - there are soo many cintests about this sort of thing!
MKate (Miriam) -
Oh man hannah, you are showing me up! This is just so meaningful and gorgeous, philosophical, it flows fantasticly. You are doing so well!
Great stuff,
Dani.
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