Hello don’t fly away,
for this is my secret garden, no need to stray.
You’ll like it here, there’s lots to do
Is that your friend, she can stay too
The wondrous things I will show
But you look magical, I bet you know
Is it hard to fly, then why can’t I
Tried it once and I did cry
I jumped up on a very big tree
Fell on the ground and cut my knee
Author notes
Photo credit: Gale Franey inspired,"the beautiful people"
A contest entry
- ALICEINPOETRYLAND: A poem for one of the beautiful people on AP ~ #120 ~ by Roaddog Wolf.
5350 points, ended October 4, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nicely penned and a wonderful form of kind expression
thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest
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It is indeed a picture to inspire and you have painted images of such a pleasant garden. I can imagine Gaylene strolling happily talking with her muse and penning her beautiful poetry. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for the pleasure of walking in this garden.
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HI
Thank you so much for your kind comments,your line pleasent garden, inspire me to write a poem that i have just put on this site entitled (Fill it up)quite a contrast if you read it
KEVIN X
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a brilliant poem dedication for a wonderful soul I love your imagery good luck in the contest
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HI
Thank you for your kind comments
KEVIN X
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A beautiful take in this picture
A lovely entry indeed.
All the best to you
Gaylene
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