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Haiku

somersault to winter
oak leaves scuttle, shedding shape 
bare skeleton shades

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  • deercatcher
    September 28, 2008

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    http://allpoetry.com/item/show/1796027
    Last time acrobats
    becoming soil to scale heights
    with return of spring.


  • PerVirtuous
    September 24, 2008
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    Very pretty and meaningful.


  • SilverQ
    September 22, 2008

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    Nice

    I admire Haiku's (cant get the hang of them)
    A bit criptic
    Keep up the good work

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    ~Need advice for my poems,thanks~