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stars


        Bright shining stars
        In the night
        Shine so brightly
        Like a bright light

        Bright shining stars
        In the sky
        Makes me wonder
        Why stars are high

        For all I know
        Stars are bright
        And they appear
        I the night       

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  • SilverQ
    September 22, 2008

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    Umm

    Is this plajurized? I already commented on this poem today.

    ~ Going for top comments, I am to poor to applaud~
    ~Need advice for me poems,thanks~

    • angelaononchan
      September 23, 2008
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      Hehe mistake. I thought I backspaced the hole poem but actually I didn't so I typed it two times.