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Wonderland

I invite you to come play
sweetest boy
darkest man
to know this angel on her knees
and be given what only

she can.


I lead you down the passage
to the room of bladed feathers
and ribboned top hats,
to confess your secrets
darkest fantasies
as only to her,
you can.

I introduce you a new world
one of maddness
and candlelight
to fulfill your desires
closest kept pleasures
as with only her,
you can.

Come to Wonderland,
my darling.
No one shall hear
our whispers,
our moans,
our screams.

It'll be our darkest secret;
this I promise,
as only I can.

Author notes

With a deliciously sexy male in mind....

Shh....

Don't tell.

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  • Super-man
    October 12, 2008

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    A piece of paper signed, only by this can eyes be blind. That peice of paper torn, left behind is only scorn


  • Tercil gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    This is almost paradise top them both, a vigilant word process to get everything form it, desirable effort here.


  • Phoenix Shadow
    September 22, 2008
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    oooh, sounds fun

    awesome writting luvly


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    Hmm the sensuality comes through in this with just enough teasing pleasure to be slightly erotic. Its easy for both sexes to be allured by this poem. Its well done. You did a great job.


  • Fulabeans
    September 22, 2008

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    Wow, I love this piece..its so well written and slightly erotic..and tastefull..well done

    I hope whomever this "delicously sexy male" takes your offer he'd be a fool not to

    well done,
    -Dusty-


  • Zombie Bad Boy gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    Holy Shit! :>

    Literally....Wow!
    I think I lost my jaw to the floor on this.
    Now you got me thinking who this guy is, and what he did to make you write this.
    If I could give you more points...I'd give you a million!
    Now that I've read this one...I'm going to read them all!

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