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Who are you?

Who are you to tell me if i could sit at the beach day and night?
Who are you to say what i do?
Who are you to comment on my work when i don't want it?
Who are you to smirk?
Who are you to wake me up from a dream as good as rest?
Who are you to just love me?
Who are you to give me advice for my problems?
Who are you to judge me?
I am your mother, i am your mother.

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