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Arid

autumn undress
natures top naked
fit frilled

autumn relieve
soiled brown clothes
button green

autumn air
roar across spaces
eddies circle

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subject: autumn

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    THis is such a wonderful haiku about the subject autumn. You have done well here to describe everything, wonderful imagery, well done my friend.