Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Forever pained

The rawness the realness
The screams and the shouts
My eardrumbs are bleading
The pain never lets out
Broken and crying
Alone on the floor
Pain never ending
Without numbness your sore
Innocence gone replaced with self doubt
The fire is fading
The phantoms are real
It plauges you existence
The hands allways there
Touching and feeling as you grasp for air
Your in your own mind now
You cower in fear
The truth cant come out
You cant ever hear

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • live-laugh-love
    September 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    ok can u send me a message w/ ur name... i'd liek 2 use ur poem in a TI (it's a forensics thing)


  • live-laugh-love
    September 22, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    o wow....
    i like...
    u deff hit every thing i said...