What is Risk?
Game or Reality?
Or is it both?
There is no finality.
If it is a Game,
Who will win?
You, or her,
or them, or him?
If Reality,
What then?
Will you still take the Risk?
What will happen in the end?
Will the outcome be,
for better or for worse?
Who Knows?
We'll see.
Could it be a curse?
Either way, you must decide.
Will you Risk it? Will you ride?
Don't even try to hide.
What is Risk?
Reality or game?
Both can result,
In death and shame.
In Game you control many,
In Reality only you.
Will it affect one?
Or more than two?
Both depend on chance,
and choices made.
Will you stand in the sun,
or in the shade?
Whichever you choose,
the question remains.
Is it Reality?
Or only a Game?
Comments
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Very good rhyme and content. In this life, we must take risks in order to achieve. Whatever the risks may bring - positive or negative - is part of our learning experience. Good piece!
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LOVE LOVE LOVE THE SUBJECT! Many people ask themselves this question everyday. I myself am not to good at the rhyme thing soi cant say too much other then you used the same bank of words over and over again and it got a bit confusing.
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pretty good
I love the concept, however some of the flow is a little off. I don't know if you are trying to go for a pattern or not, but it seems like you were but didn't quite make it fit in some lines. Otherwise, I loved the poem. I don't always like repitition, but you pull it off very well here. Most of all, it makes me think, and I like that!
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