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Sweet Dreams

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silken rhapsody
falls calmly upon thoughts
like the soft melody of rain,

I close my eyes
drifting into blissful realms
seduced in mists of heaven's harp,

carefree stars
push aside somber skies,
whispering sweet serenity,

moonlight bathes repose
swaying into quiet song
and I ease
                                into dream.

 

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  • poetmaster32
    March 18
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    i wish my dreams were like that. nice work.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    A very wistful take on the picture. The background goes extremely well with your poem. Beautifully penned, good luck


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      September 25, 2008
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      Thank you for HM and the chance to write for these beautiful pics.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Very serene and pretty!! Had a very delicate feel to it which suits the picture! Ahh for peaceful dreams...


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    Breathtakingly Beautiful...

    Best of luck in the contest!!! Peace, Cyn

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      September 24, 2008
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      Thank you so much my friend. Your kindness is deeply appreciated.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    September 23, 2008

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    excellent

    So peaceful and dreamlike
    Love this sweetie
    Best of luck in the contest
    This one is a winner in my book
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • sxylilma
    September 23, 2008
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    great match

    I think this poem was the best match of the pic


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    Excellent imagery--Love the language used--
    Great take on the picture.
    Well done & Best of Luck in the contest!


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    Nice. I like the peaceful view that you have on this poem. It has a perfect dreamlike quality to it.

    Good job.

    Mike


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    Just beautiful This is a wonderfully written piece. The imagery and soft flow is just gorgeous
    All the best with this!
    Gaylene

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      September 22, 2008
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      Thank you dear, that's sweet of you. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.


  • hotpinkpenguin
    September 22, 2008
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    I really liked this poem. It is beautiful and you have a great talent with words.

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