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Autumn Melancholy

Red leaves bathe in rain
cold chills rack my bony arms
left sleeveless and raw

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At last!

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  • sonG fOr a frienD
    September 24, 2008
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    Ooo autumn, i am so ready for you!

  • saddie23
    September 22, 2008
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    this is cute

    Need to cover those bony arms lol. Made me smile. Liked your poem. Saddie23