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A Visitor

 

Last night I had a visitor,

this is how I know;

 

 

The room is filled with

the sweet scent of lavender,

and lit by a single burning candle.

With steamy temperate water

surrounding me,

soft rhythmic music

heard softly echoing.

Slowly I begin to relax

and my thoughts turn to you.

Suddenly I can feel

your hand in mine,

I open my eyes

and I am still alone.

 

 

Last night I had a visitor;

that was how I knew.

 

 

 

 

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"for Him as always"

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 24, 2008

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    a wonderful visitor for a wonderful woman...from out of your dreams does softly flow the one you do love so...beautiful my sweet sister


    • freespirit51
      September 24, 2008
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      Tender wolf

      Glad you enjoyed nsweet sister as you know what lays beneath these words and my visitor.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    A beautiful piece of writing..showing much love and longing...The specialness of our dreams become such a part of our daily life. We can lose ourselves in our memories. Well written my friend.
    Soulful Woman

    • freespirit51
      September 22, 2008
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      Soulful Woman

      Thanks so much for you very kind and generous words. I am glad you enjoyed it, and I am glad to see you are still reading my work. I have not seen you for some time..Thanks again.


  • trekkergirl
    September 22, 2008
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    hummmm.... okay. Not real sure about this one.

    • freespirit51
      September 22, 2008
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      trekkergirl

      So sorry you did not seem to get the point behind this one. If you read my authors page about my Hetane Moodayo-Okohke you may get a better understanding of this piece as well as many others. That is why I always put "for Him as always" in my notes.

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