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Love my God

my love is with me wherever I go.
he is better to me than others know.
he endures so much my imperfections
and still loves me without question.

my love is with me whever I go.
he is greater than all others you know?
his heart endures so much my defections
and still loves me with all his affection.

I love my love so much because
he has a heart that loves without cause.
better than any other man on earth he is
all my children will too be his.

Oh my love is God because
he's the only one that loves without cause.
as long as we show that we do try
to avoid the wrongs that make people cry.

so any children that I may gain,
will be from God through their baptism attained.
yes they will be mine because the seed I watered
and they will be Gods because he owns the seed planted.

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    honestly beautiful and sincere. Reminded King David's writing in The Book of Psalms. Thank you for reviewing my poetery.