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The Darkness in the Light

Tears
Filling up
a pool of malcontent.
Shines below the image of a bright
heavenly body. Waves of thought break
the surface, glimmering, lined of silver.

Sharing,
old times
with your best friends
though you feel as if your life's been choked.

Showing you
even the darkness that surrounds
can bring light, that of
sunny days. The moon,
your friend, bringing to light your brightest hours
of hope. Giving
you will, seeing what may have been
hidden, shadowed.

Lurking,
but, when the moon grows
as full as the waters
of your thoughts.
Darkness is revealed
to you.

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  • crivanea silver member
    October 4, 2008

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    very true words u penned..thnx for the entry..best of luck..

    Filling up
    a pool of malcontent.

    interesting word choice