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You and Me

You scream for me,
I scream for you,
You save my life,
I shield you
from the world outside,
You give me a place to hide.

I may not be a superhero,
But together we are
A huge army of soldiers.

I am not muscular,
I am not very strong,
But together
We can break irons and chains.

You stand up for me,
I stand up for you,
You comfort me,
I heal your wounds,
You shelter me from the storm,
I give you light when
All is dark around you.

I don't have superpowers,
But together
We can fight any demons or monsters.

I am not a warrior,
I am not dressed in armor,
But together,
We are immortal,
We can't be killed.

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Love poem.

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  • catalyst.
    September 21, 2008

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    What I really admired about this is it was a freshwrite. Also I loved the metaphors and similes in this. Great job!