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And I can still hear your voice in my ear....

the dancefloor was dark, but your smile kept it lit for me,
and the song wasn't right
                        but I didn't mind
                        because it provided me with a reason to slide my hands around your waist
                        and keep them there

we were dancing much closer than "just friends" should,
                    but I didn't mind
                    because I've been waiting for that to change anyway.

      leaning in, I whispered in your ear
      (I had to, after all, the music was so loud)
    "would it be out of line for me to kiss you right now?"
    and you waited a beat to say "no,"

I took my hand off the small of your back
            long enough to move it under your chin

            and your lips met mine
            all too briefly,
            nevertheless it was
                  the best kiss I've ever had

    and that's all I have to say
    I just wish I could say it to you

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True story. And I'm pretty sure she still doesn't get it.

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  • lovedxinxsighs
    September 29
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    aww thats cute.
    sorry she doesnt get it. xD thats probably frustrating.


  • Lola Lola
    September 28
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    romantic.


  • mwilson50
    September 28

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    Ahh, unrequited love

    ...So frustrating, we have to be content with the merest hints of contact. Better that, and a surge of optimism, than naught. Can relate to this.