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Reason With Me

Deflower and devour me.
Make me ripple like the sea.
Let's run together--I'll flow with thee.
One moment of stupidity,
One moment in eternity
Is all it takes and here's the stakes:
If from all of these mistakes
We still find no perfection
In our wet, wriggling reflection
We'll part ways. Say goodbye to the days
When only the first rays of sun would stop our fun.
But if just one night
Could be made right (we could make it right)
Why, then, I'm ready for this fight. 

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  • mr cheeseydude
    September 30, 2008

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    It's not all it's cracked up to be.

    I see it clearly now. It fucks you up. Trust me. I love you too much for you to be hurt.