yellow dress slips off
'round trunk, wind blushes naked
in nature's virgin.
~~~
Author notes
I love how the leaves turn yellow and fall. :]
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku 5-7-5 by piccola.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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what beauty you have written here. short and sweet and oh so lovely .
I really liked this
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A great view of autaum daughter, so well written in such a few words, blessings Dad
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tree-sensual! a good haiku... if only I could play you the video in my head...
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