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Separated Love

To kiss soft, gentle lips
To feel the touch of warm fingertips
To hold and never let go
To bring back memories of so long ago
Shaking silently at the impending separation
Knowing the full influence of desperation
Forced to let go by the time and place
Wanting to stay in each other's warm embrace
Walking away always proves to be a chore
Always wanting to run back once more
A gentle kiss once again, a parting goodbye
As we walk away, trying so hard not to cry
A quick 'I love you', a whisper through halls
A door quietly closes, a raindrop falls.

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  • midnitevampire22
    September 21, 2008

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    I LOVE IT! it's absolutely brilliant i wish i had thought of that! i give it two thumbs and toes up! lol.