a cider press ooze
season of fruitfulness
a nats choir rejoice
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku 5-7-5 by piccola.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hmmm... you're right. I never really thought of it like that XD Usually poems use Autumn as a symbol of death or an end, because in the autumn all the trees go dormant and everything becomes colder and darker. It's very optimistic for you to look at it that way.
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thank u
I'm glad you are optimistic. Everything has yen-yang approach including the seasons. Thank you for the comment again. Saddie23
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Great
Great, It is-In my opinion-a very great thing indead to have a comic haiku that can be acutaly understood
. Rewarded 4
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thank u
I'm glad you liked my ku. Thank you for wonderful comments given.Saddie23
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pretty nice, somewhat difficult to understand. Are you referring to Autumn as the season of fruitfulness? If so, that is a very interesting point. Autumn is normally seen as something of a depressing, fruitless time. I like it.
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Thank u
Thank you for the wonderful comments given to my ku. Sure I think of Autumn is a season of fruitfulness, apple cider, pumpkins are all come apart of the season. Autumn, maybe form of dying and rebirth in what we feast. Saddie23
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