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Shepherd's Prayer (Haiku #4)

Refine me, Oh, Lord
That I may reflect your face
Loving all You love

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  • Lady Mak
    December 6, 2008
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    A lovely and true write dear poet...thank you for sharing..


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 9, 2008
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    This one makes me want to weep a bit for it is my prayer too...keep up the good work lol


  • myrataal silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    Simple, straightforward, divine!

    Loved this.

    I loved how you use the rockfast mountain in this picture, touched and refined by the Rising Sun. Well done!

    Blessed be.

    Myra


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    Beautiful Haiku

    Hello Wade, Uplifting as always. If we could all love like Him, what a beautiful world it would be for everyone. A delight to read and so nice to see you writing!

    Grace and Peace,
    Sandy

  • goalsv
    September 22, 2008
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    A hearty Amen!

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