Does he compare to you at all?
Does he steal my heart away
With each and every breath he takes?
If I keep giving myself false hope
I'll find myself lost and alone
Just like every time before
If we keep lying to ourselves
We'll lose what we've wanted all along
And that's not something I want
I hate you, but love who you are
I just can't get over the fact
That you may just not feel the same
I don't care what they say anymore
They can persuay me all they want
But nothing will stop my love for you
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Does she compare to you at all?
Does she steal my heart away
With each and every breath she takes?
You know that you're right
If we gave it a second chance
This would never work again
It really was all my fault
But you just won't let me sat that
Why do you argue if you know it's true?
I used to wake up every morning
With your face still fresh in my mind
And every morning, I still do
I don't care what they say anymore
They can persuay me all they want
But nothing will stop my love for you
Author notes
What I did was separate it into the girl's thoughts and then the guys thoughts. Another one that took me about ten minutes. I just keep whipping these out, huh? xD
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Comments
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very nice poem i loved it and could feel the love very nice but it is very hard to read you should really change the color of the words nice write keep it up....
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sweet...stubborn? love the repetition too
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Thanks for the comment!
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