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[I Hate You]

i hate you for
making me cry through out the night...

i hate you for
not telling me why...

i hate you for
proving them right...

but...

i HATE myself more for
falling in love with you...

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  • angel of the dead
    February 5
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    awwww

    jackie i love you this is a good poem short and to the point


  • sexyvampire1
    September 23, 2008

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    Great, but......

    this poem is very heart felt and emotional, if only because of the subject, but I think that you could add a little more to it. Like put some more details in it. Just some critisizm,(is that spelled right?) you know i love you. Catherine