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[Your Love]

your love is like a poison...

killing me ever so slowly...

speeding up my heartbeat...

not allowing me to breath...

suffocating my being...

and the only thing im seeing is you...

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  • Violent Glass
    July 23
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    i hate how a guy can get under your skin like that, just tear you apart or 'poisen' you.
    great write thanx for sharing with me


  • angel of the dead
    February 5

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    OMG WOW

    dang your poems are crazy they make you think and i like them alot good job love you

  • F-139381512
    September 23, 2008
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    bravo my darling

  • beckyanne
    September 21, 2008
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    me likey