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Weaved Through Subconscious Thought, Now I'll Never Know

Wrapped up memories repress,
underlying vital impulses,
with  a lost chain of thought.
Submersing the minds psych,
into a loss of individuality,
entwining and twisting the,
the hearts trellis of emotions,
until the deep-rooted self ego,
declines to recall knowledge
of this .

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20. Weaved Through Subconscious Thought, Now I'll Never Know
sorry not that good the best I can do lol

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  • penman gold member
    September 27, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    very well penned
    your word usage is phenomenal
    but, IMO, it would be easier to read if you centered the text


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    How beautiful hun
    Wrapped up memories repress,
    underlying vital impulses, ..
    loved the whole poem what words penned here
    Best wishes in the contest
    Julie xx