colored leaves float down
to the frosty street pavement
end and beginning
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku 5-7-5 by piccola.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ahhhh...the 'fall', huh? Very clever; great imagery too. You have summed up so much in so few words. Well done.
AsIThink...
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lovely haiku. this poem is beautifully written
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A nice haiku to usher in the new season! Thanks Celadia!
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good haiku , wish i could do it,, good luck x
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Pretty and thought provoking
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