Remoteness digs steep ravines between lovers.
Rifts are ultimate in long separations.
A reunion is the eventual resolution
Broken hearts mending,
Before it is too late.
Please tell me what you think
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This is a very short poem to contain such deep meaning. Many times I think people give up too early and allow cracks and rifts to become chasms.
Great job.
Mike
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Thank you dear Mike for stopping by and commenting
If I allow it and give up then I would have lost him, but you know something, time will tell and it is a two way road, if he doesnt meet me soon enough, it will be too late as the gorge will be too deep to fill. He is trying too and circumstances are difficult but it has to be both of us. I will tell you of the result
Thank you dear for caring and commenting
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OH HOW TRUE!!!
The old saying absence makes the love grow stronge is not often true. If enough time passes without being together both move on and and forget what they once had. At least in todays world this is true, I for one do hold onto my memories longer than most and in some cases still have a empty place inside for certain ones from my past. Not necessarly loves but friends also.
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actually it is so scary
Many a time I have seen that rifts dont ever close by a reunion. each one goes his own ways, especially if they were already married. I hold on to my own memories and I was thinking of myself as I am in this position and trying hard to keep things and memories and feeligs intact till we get together, but all before it is too late
I made him read it
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