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Unbreakable



Bonds of the soul,
intertwined in the light,
shall not be shadowed,
by the darkest night.

Pleasures of understanding,
warms the loving heart,
sharing all of life’s wisdom,
till the day we must part.

Tears will flow like rain,
for time is so inevitable,
but the bond between us,
shall remain unbreakable.





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Dedicated to my wife who passed away on this day, fourteen years ago. I still love you hun. Option #3

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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    Love for a lost lover is so grand, I am sure she still cares deeply for you, for love that strong, never dies.

    Joann


  • KyleBerg gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    Beautiful poetry
    I'm sorry for your loss I find it so touching that you can still feel a connection after the fourteen years. That's powerful. It takes longer poems to make me cry, but this did make me very sad.
    Well done.
    Good luck, thanks for entering


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    I love this beautiful dedication to your wife..
    love is unbreakable
    Thank you and may the sun continue to shine in your heart forever
    Julie


  • maralisa silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    a great take on the promt I could feel your precuios bonds within your poem good luck in the contest


  • unavailable
    September 21, 2008

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    this is a lovely short piece, Karl.
    It's so nice to see someone loves so deeply as you do.

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