My girl-child
Within the moody blue girl-woman rage
You conquered
You emblazoned hearts
Beyond a name and a face
My girl-child,
Within your still-child cocoon
You grow restless and ready,
Eager to burst forth
Beyond your childhood furrow
......and into tomorrow.
Author notes
Picture Credit Due... by Opal_by_Raipun
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest 10 entries 40 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended September 22, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Truly unquie...I seemed to find the reference words odd, but it just may being me being me or me being sick...it is very creative...
thank you for entering!
mystic -
Very beatiful words that you have
thought up for this picture. I love
your background as well. Good luck
to you with this one!
Jeremy0826 -
This is very beautiful. Incredible take on the picture.
Very well written and presented. Best of luck in the contest.
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