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Chances

Yeah I admit it
I made a mistake.
No, it was stupid.  Really.
Still, it was a mistake.
I didn't mean to...well, you know.
No.  It won't happen again.
I promise.
Just give me another chance.
I won't ever mess up again.

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totally awesome monkeys  Prompt:  I just want one more chance.

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  • trinajean
    September 25, 2008
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    this was an interesting take on the prompt.

    i enjoyed it.

    thanks for your entry!