For some one so smart
How could I be so dumb
Every time I was down
You sent me further in the ground
You never even saw me fall
All these years and now I’m alone
Irony to the extreme
That I was the one hurt
Yet you are laughing
Aren’t you supposed to care
Yet you’re watching me die
But you won’t help me
Cuz, you’re scared of what they’ll think
All you do is try to please
By laughing when they tease
This is just another note I’ll never send
Love your best friend
A contest entry
- MY Faves (everyone welcome) by peridotPixi.
600 points, ended September 22, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hatred at it's best. by Rejected Easter Egg.
1080 points, ended October 25, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 8 by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended October 25, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Those are very hard feelings to have to reconcile. This is a good outlet. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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thank you for this entry to my faves contest, i like this poem in general... i like how you have espressed your feelings deep here,please add your name to the Notes so i know who to add to my faves list
and as always keep up the writing
~Amy
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