The hurt will stop when the mind stops wondering,
The hurt wil stop when the heart stops bleeding,
you will smile when you let yourself,
you will be happy when you surround your self with happieness,
look to those who make you smile, and let your self ...even ifits fake.
A contest entry
- ANYTHING TO JUST FEEL BETTER... by written-in-ink.
563 points, ended September 24, 2008, 32 entries
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Comments
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I read one of your others and it was good but too depressing for me at the mo.
This ones beautiful. Ive written a poem before about the strange positives of faking a smile.
: ) You have a lovely day. Or night. Whatever it is.
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I see you have the spirit of Yeats in your writing lass.
Short , specific and personal.
You'll find as you get older that even fake smiles are to much trouble...
in fact anything for anyone's benefit but your own seems like a horrible waste of time....lol
This was a good write with an introspective sense to how the writer feels.
Thank you for taking time from your life to read my work lass...
help yourself...they love the attention...lol
your comments are valued ten fold knowing how well you write.
Blessings always,
Lowell Poe.
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I've put on those fake smiles tooo many times, so this write is all too familiar to me. I think you've done a good job on this short but to the point write.
Keep penning!
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