Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

The Ibex

Missing image
Born under the sign of the mountain goat
I’m ever one to seize life by its throat.
I push ahead, never mind the rocks,
Not caring if opportunity knocks.
If it does not, then I will build a door;
A new means of egress to something more.

It may, at times, seem a wild ride
But, I will keep you safe at my side.
Loyal, I will defend you to the end.
You have become my closet, dearest friend.
Perhaps an overly ambitious plan;
Yet, some day I hope to hold your soft hand.

~ for Stef ~

Author notes

The prompt was Capricorn. Capricorns tend to appear as risk takers, walking on the edge, but actually are careful planners. They are ambitious, tenacious, and do not recognize obstacles. They are also romantic.

In early European astrology texts, Capricorn was represented as an Ibex, a form of mountain goat.

Picture prompt credit: http://erebusodora.deviantart.com/art/Capricorn-60502237

"I am universe, I am life "

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 10 of 10

  • Re-invention silver member
    October 2, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    as I said before, this is very well penned and beautiful. For you took it in and made it personal... nicely done!


  • pinkink
    September 25, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I hope you get to hold her hand soon, that was fantastic.


  • Re-invention silver member
    September 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    nicely penned... this was a veru good write and amazing way to observe here... I see you look out on the info of your prompt lol well done!


    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      September 23, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      I am glad you enjoyed the poem. It was something different fro me. Thank you for reading and commenting.

      Mike


  • superchargedprincess
    September 22, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Goat? Hmm, I suppose I can see that being that you live in the land of the moosessss

    I see mushies spilling out of your pockets ! Very much like this piece of your collection. Thanks for always taking care of and looking out for moi

  • Re-invention silver member
    September 22, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
      September 22, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you ma'am. I have the assignment. My dog ate my homework. I will hand it in soon.

1 - 10 of 10