I’m ever one to seize life by its throat.
I push ahead, never mind the rocks,
Not caring if opportunity knocks.
If it does not, then I will build a door;
A new means of egress to something more.
It may, at times, seem a wild ride
But, I will keep you safe at my side.
Loyal, I will defend you to the end.
You have become my closet, dearest friend.
Perhaps an overly ambitious plan;
Yet, some day I hope to hold your soft hand.
~ for Stef ~
Author notes
The prompt was Capricorn. Capricorns tend to appear as risk takers, walking on the edge, but actually are careful planners. They are ambitious, tenacious, and do not recognize obstacles. They are also romantic.
In early European astrology texts, Capricorn was represented as an Ibex, a form of mountain goat.
Picture prompt credit: http://erebusodora.deviantart.com/art/Capricorn-60502237
"I am universe, I am life "
A contest entry
- Zodiac Contest by Re-invention.
700 points, ended November 8, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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as I said before, this is very well penned and beautiful. For you took it in and made it personal... nicely done!
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Thanks again. I am glad you enjoyed it!!
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I hope you get to hold her hand soon, that was fantastic.


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So do I. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Mike
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nicely penned... this was a veru good write and amazing way to observe here... I see you look out on the info of your prompt lol well done!
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I am glad you enjoyed the poem. It was something different fro me. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Mike
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Goat? Hmm, I suppose I can see that being that you live in the land of the moosessss
I see mushies spilling out of your pockets
! Very much like this piece of your collection. Thanks for always taking care of and looking out for moi
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I do it because you are the best.
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Thank you ma'am. I have the assignment. My dog ate my homework. I will hand it in soon.
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