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Good Ol' Days

I’ll write a love song
Sitting on my front porch
Watching children passing by
Band-aids on each scraped up knee
Running around and climbing trees

Eight years later
Sitting in that tree
They start kissing and exploring

Now the band-aids are off their knees
Holding their hearts together
By a very thin string

As time goes by
Our love will change
But we will always remember
The good old days

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  • Heartbreaker Eyes
    September 21, 2008
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    This made me smile. It was cute.
    I like how simply put it was, but it got emotion.