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Dresser of secrets

Missing image
Letters written with feminine tears
hoarse screaming pain within men
line the bottom of that dresser.

Secrets sold for a price so dear
the precious ones
have become crazed and ill.
sold they're souls to the enigma
who guards it still,
Until Judgment day.

Father forgive them
for they know not what they do.





























Author notes

earth art


Mortal life held hostage

A contest entry

Touch me back.

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    August 31

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    Awesome Sis...

    Impressive work...
    So much expressed so beautifully in so few words that leaves me breathless in its depth...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • Jepardy
    April 26

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    Very nice. I love the near mystery of it and the feeling behind the words. A very good piece here. Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck.

  • xSnowflakex
    April 10
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    love

  • ashjoe76
    March 25
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    Truly interesting work.

  • Judith Chandler
    February 22

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    An interesting image, the letters written in tears and used to line the dresser.

    I enjoyed this write.


  • Lowell Poe
    October 9, 2008

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    Very wild.
    Thank you for reading my work.
    I must read more.
    you have peaked my curiosity lass.

    Blessings,
    LOWELL POE


  • arafura gold member
    September 21, 2008
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    Lovely work. One of your best!

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