under where the moon takes rest
thunder bellow at sea crest
plunging on a piercing rock
moonlight low in gridlock
the storm revel resistance in the mist
in shadow land a rebel resist
the skies beneath his raven wings
lash with heaven’s winds
binds his mission as castle king
roaring rashly scorching
air into light
warrior wear the blood of fight
dawning on an empire forbidden
knight of the dark hidden
capture the castle as his domain
dark dragon rapture and reign
Author notes
Picture Prompt:
http://mohammed-alsulaiti.deviantart.com/art/Fantasy-95241175
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt by Riamh.
600 points, ended September 21, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah...no words..the last stanza is simply a magic..you wrote the fact which is so beautully crafted yet brought the closesest darkness around the concept..what an outcome you are here with..well done...
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Imaginative
I could close my eyes and envision a warrior fighting for his throne. Good imagery
Angelea
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Very good take on the prompt. Well done. Best of luck.
Slayer
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