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Cosmic String

I've found no way to close
The screen door in my heart
The one your kiss left open
A draft that comes from outside
The wind perfumed with promise
Yellow brick road to the future
I'm on the back of a chance encounter
Flying to the sunrise of a star I've never seen
A cosmic string to reign over
This universe of chaos
The path of time that leads to you
It promises to be unbreakable

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    I love the thoughts within
    the path the doorway its screen
    Cosmic and wonderful
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • maralisa silver member
    September 22, 2008
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    a great take on the promt good luck in the contest