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Echoed Past

Vanquished lonely stands alone.
Shutters from cellar to roofs loam.
No longer home.

by suseann

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Picture Credit: http://digitalhomicide.deviantart.com/art/Abandoned-House-5166705
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  • secberm
    September 21, 2008

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    Reminds me of many homes no longer homes. But there are still memories in those halls, lips on those walls, and bones and black sheeps rattling in a closet or two. Write on, sis and good luck.

    Dez


  • masterblaster gold member
    September 21, 2008
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    This says a lot in 13 words, great ,all the best in the contest, hugs Di