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Mirror of the Storm

The lone regret
Of the stormiest sea
Waves rise and fall
Just like the emotion
In the vermillion
That was one as calm
As a newborn lamb
Soft and warm
Flawless on it's surface
A mirror to the ultimate destruction

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  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    September 22, 2008

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    Really good write!

    Don't comment back until the contest is over

    ~Lorissa~