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Sanguine Star~

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Before a tear drops,
she shines

lending her light
to languished lashes
as a bowed head
lifts to sigh

and another smile is reborn;

laughter of playful Angels
lingering as she leaves,

winds in a whisper

as quills softly breathe
sanguine thoughts to sky.









~

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for Wanda (Night Hope)

who always knows when to lend a word of encouragement and a hug...
Thank you, my friend

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  • Yorkshire kevin
    September 25, 2008
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    HI
    Nice poetic words which hold beauty
    KEVIN


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    September 24, 2008
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    before a tear drops, she shines.....ah yes....indeed. this is a lovely poem...full of Wanda.


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 23, 2008

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    "as quills softly breathe
    sanguine thoughts to sky."

    I was especially moved by these lines, my Friend. What a lovely, pleasing sentiment that is. Thank you so much for comin' by to acknowledge my 50 years wanderin' upon this earth. Good luck in Carol's contest, Sweetie.


  • tomisb
    September 22, 2008
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    Lovely words celebrating one of the gifts on our site. Well done.
    Love, Tom B.


  • transcendental baby gold member
    September 22, 2008
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    Aw Wander Woman will love this beautiful song in her honor


    • poet2angels gold member
      September 22, 2008
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      I hope s
      She deserves it ...
      TY for stopping my, my friend

      Lynda


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    A Beautiful Tribute!

    She is indeed a ray of hope for those without!
    And very deserving of such a wonderful tribute.
    Thanks for sharing your love with those you love.
    Let your light shine sweet sis, much love.

    Brother Timothy


  • jasminerose
    September 21, 2008

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    Oh what a truly lovely dedication for a very special lady indeed!! So beautifully written with soft alliteration and heartfelt emotions for your friendship! Absolutely gorgeous!
    Jazzy


  • Errant Panther gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    lovely use of alliteration in this beautiful dedication to one of the finest poets on the site. I am sure she will absolutely adore this. great job cuz


  • kaibab silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    She is this a tear and a smile to everything worthwhile...loving soul in Nature's arms...she will love this angel poet

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