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maple trees

maple trees turn red
and set great forest ablaze
lithe squirrels scatter

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  • Melodies
    September 21, 2008

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    Lovely autumn scene and I admire how you set the forest on fire with the color red. Very imaginative with squirrels running!


  • Candy6
    September 21, 2008
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    I like maple tree

    Very nice


  • Olivias Violin
    September 21, 2008
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    I like maple trees; and I like the line about the squirrels