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Laying beside you as you sleep tonight
your face painted by the pale moon light
looks so peaceful and angelic
I've never been able to tell you
how I feel about you
just how much I care
and that I love you
while you're awake
I like the way we are together
all the things we do
and how we talk
I don't want to ruin that
so I pretend the feelings are fake
but when we're like this
I feel less afraid to confess my love for you
I gently caress your sleeping face and smile
feeling your arms wrap around my holding me near
I wish we could always be this way
Maybe one day
things will change
and this friendship will develop into something more
but until then I'll lay beside you
confessing my feelings to you as you sleep
cuz secretly I know you're listening
that's why you smile as you sleep







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XSuicidalSecretsX

Um....yeah.....not that I expect anything to come of this....since it sucks but whatever...I just thought I'd write it anyways

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  • Samantha Marie
    September 22, 2008
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    awh i like this especially the last lines,
    so cute
    thanks for entering and good luckie duckie!


  • biggdoggspaz5000
    September 21, 2008

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    it a great write love it keep going keep it up im going to add for fav so i can keep out the rest out it