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undeniable

your middle name must be heartache
and you know trouble like it’s your best friend

i have everything the way i like it, nice and neat
my life comes together

you said it yourself, a bad time for me
and an absolutely perfect time for you

it’s like a miracle

and we couldn’t be more wrong for one another
it could be called polar opposite

but

your rough edges
and my neat ends
they come together like fate

every finger interlaces and it’s almost perfect
until our lips finally meet.. and then it is perfect

just right in every way

you are mine
you are undeniable

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  • queen Moderators member
    September 22, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi al9609

    You have such great lines in this poem good luck in the contest please keep writing, reading and commenting
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  • peregrin
    September 21, 2008

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    Wow...
    So touching.
    I love it.
    It is powerful,
    and the emotions are so real.
    Great write.

    Thank you for the entry!