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The term "destiny"
doesn't fit as the reason we met

The term "Love at first sight"
Isn't enough to explain how I fell for you

The term "Soul Mates"
just doesn't cut it when it comes to us

You're like made for me
and I for you

cut out like a perfect little puzzle
we just fit together

Perfect

But "perfect" isn't the word
no word can tell the world how much I love you
even those three words aren't enough

They say actions speak louder then words
so let me hold you through the night
and watch over you as you sleep

 

Let me be the first person you see

when you open your eyes in the morning

as the sun shines through the window

 

Let me smile and kiss you gently

first thing in the morning

when you open those beautiful eyes

When we leave

 

Let me hold your hand
when we walk together side by side
and smiling we walk in-sync without knowing it

 

Let me kiss you

and let the world see our passion

holding each other close in a loving embrace

 

Let's laugh and play

as people stare in curiosity

and feel like we're alone

 

I know this still isn't enough

to show you

just how much I love you

 

but I do

Forever and for always

 

I love you

too much

but never enough

 

 

 

 



 

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This is to Joshua my wonderful boyfriend

anyone besides him might not really understand this piece

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  • GypsySyah
    September 27, 2008

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    Terrific!

    I may not know the stories of your times with your boyfriend, but I understand the feelings you poured into this write! Very well done- loved it! BTW, thanks for all you said about my poetry, etc. You have alot of wisdom. I don't feel my life is destroyed, only my past- but my present & future are shining! Peace- Syah (Kaleb's Momma)


  • Samantha Marie
    September 22, 2008

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    awh this is lovely m'dear
    i am truly jealous of joshua so much!!!
    haha
    thanks for entering and good luck love


  • killerkaleb
    September 21, 2008

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    me

    dude thx for reading my poem thx for the point i like ur poem but not a 3 hand claping it was still awsome dude bye