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Hummingbirds (Hay(na)ku)

Hummingbirds
Stirring, whirring
Sight and sound

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  • Peripatetic gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    This is a short form to stretch the poet’s imagination for describing a moment of existence.
    This descriptive verse brings to mind the memory of the sudden, startling whirring of a hummingbird by my ear and then hovering before my eyes as I walked a quiet stream deep in the San Gabriel Mountains one warm summer afternoon.